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Was his first name in fact "Roman"? In all references that I've seen, he's simply "Ignacy Potocki." What does " Nobel Family" mean? Logologist 22:26, 23 Dec 2004 (UTC)

His full name was "Roman Ignacy Franciszek Potocki" - "nobel family" was a mistake.--Emax 22:59, 23 Dec 2004 (UTC)


The term "consort" is generally reserved for the spouse of a reigning monarch, which Potocki was not. Why the plural ("Consorts")? Consider "Spouse"?

Are we to understand that Potocki was, after all, a polygamist: that he had "Children" (plural!) with Elżbieta Lubomirska and with Krystyna Potocka? (Lubomirska already appears, above, as his spouse.)

Why not use the handier "Birthplace" and "Birth date"? One gets lost in all the "of"'s.

The closing information about when Potocki married (whom he married is already in the box) and received his White Eagle makes the piece read like a newspaper obituary rather than an encyclopedia article. Logologist 04:15, 24 Dec 2004 (UTC)

Im using the same tables in all (szlachta) articles, see: List of szlachta - that he received the White Eagle Order is an important information. "Whom he married is already in the box" - yes, but not when and where ;)--Emax 04:30, 24 Dec 2004 (UTC)

B-class review

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Further information: Wikipedia:Version 1.0 Editorial Team/Assessment/B-class criteria:

  1. suitably referenced, with inline citations where necessary, Green tickY
  2. reasonably covers the topic, and does not contain obvious omissions or inaccuracies, Green tickY
  3. has a defined structure, Green tickY
  4. reasonably well-written, Green tickY
  5. contains supporting materials where appropriate, Green tickY
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Poeticbent talk 20:12, 7 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Ignacy Potocki/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: QatarStarsLeague (talk · contribs) 23:59, 17 June 2013 (UTC) This article has languished long enough. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 23:59, 17 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

Overall:
Pass/Fail:

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Infobox and lead

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Fine here.

Life

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"...(Komisja Edukacji Narodowej)– the world's first ministry of education – he was.." Proper spacing in accordance with the hyphens.
In the first paragraph of the "Political career" section, you start a sentence with "In 1781...". In the second paragraph, you start a sentence with "On 29 May 1773...". Why the chronologic disparity?


"...office of the Writer of Lithuania..." Was he a scribe then? Either way, please elucidate.


"...a nickname bakałarz." Please write as "...a nickname: bakałarz." Also, what does this nickname mean?
You already wikilinked Familia in the first section.


"...with Russia attitude..." "...with the Russian attitude...", maybe?


"...of a Minister of War." No need for "a".
"...even after Poniatowski's access to it." Access isn't the correct word, maybe accession?
That is all.

Done all marked plus minor. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 17:15, 29 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Remembrance

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This is as miniscule a section as any, but the content affords its own section nonetheless.

Conslucion

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Very fine article. Once everything has been addressed and allayed, I will pass this article. Excellent work and congratulations! QatarStarsLeague (talk) 01:03, 25 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]